HomeMy WebLinkAboutVI(a)_Additional Materials Received_Draft Minutes of October 27, 2022From:Jim Mosher
To:CDD
Cc:Rodriguez, Clarivel
Subject:Possible corrections to GPUSC minutes of 10/27/2022 (Joint Meeting Item IV.a)
Date:January 18, 2023 3:44:14 PM
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Sorry for the late submission, but regarding Item IV.a on tonight's GPUSC/GPAC joint
meeting, I would suggest these corrections:
Page 3 of the 5 page PDF, lines 3 & 4 at top: "dove tail" should be one word:
"dovetail"
Page 4, paragraph 1, sentence 2: "Furthermore, Mr. Mosher expressed a lack of
understanding of how the plan did not prevent prevented the City’s risk of exposure
to commercial sites being used for residential development in the airport area, and, if
it does, questioned why the City would not pursue protect other areas of the City
from the same risk."
Page 5, paragraph 5: "There was no further public comment received." or "There
was no public comment received on that topic."
I noticed a few other passages in which the wording chosen may have similarly
distorted what the speakers said, or was difficult to decipher, but I have not verified
them against the video.
Yours sincerely,
Jim Mosher
General Plan Update Steering Committee and Gneral Plan Advisory Commitee - January 18, 2023 Item No. VI(a) - Additioanl Materials Received Draft Minutes of October 27, 2022