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Subject:FW: Suggested corrections to March 22, 2023, GPUSC minutes
From: Jim Mosher <jimmosher@yahoo.com>
Sent: May 02, 2023 12:38 PM
To: CDD <CDD@newportbeachca.gov>
Subject: Suggested corrections to March 22, 2023, GPUSC minutes
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Having reviewed the draft GPUSC minutes scheduled to be presented as Item IV.a on their May 3
agenda, I believe the committee might want to consider the following very minor revisions:
Page 2, second full paragraph from end: "misnomers" might be better rendered as
"misunderstandings" (the video shows Ms. Walker used both terms)
Page 4, paragraph 4: "shares concern" should be "shares concern about."
Page 4, end of paragraph 6: "commented an observation" would seem better as "provided an
observation" or, even better, "observed"
Page 5, paragraph 2 (in two places): "Mayor Pro Tem's" should be "the Mayor Pro Tem's"
-- Jim Mosher
General Plan Update Steering Committee - May 3, 2023 Item No. IV(a) - Additional Materials Received Draft Minutes of March 22, 2023