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May 14, 2024
Written Comments
May 14, 2024, City Council Agenda Comments
The following comments on items on the Newport Beach City Council agenda are submitted by:
Jim Mosher (jimmosherno_yahoo.com ), 2210 Private Road, Newport Beach 92660 (949-548-6229)
Item 1. Minutes for the April 9, 2024 City Council Meeting
The passages shown in italics below are from the draft minutes with suggested corrections
shown in sWkeeu underline format. The page numbers refer to Volume 66.
Page 82, Item X, paragraph 3, last sentence: "He noted there has been little public input
since February, decisionmakers have been intimately involved and are equity members of
Newport Harbor Yacht Clubs and/or hold mooring permits, yacht clubs would be exempt from
the fee increases, and 58% of mooring permittees live outside the City and will be paying
more than those living in Gafifeffria it." [See video. The speaker did not identify who they
would be paying more than, but the implication was Newport Beach residents. "California"
makes no sense, since nearly all harbor renters, including those living outside the City, live in
the state.]
Page 83, Item 13, paragraph 2: "Senior Planner Lee utilized a presentation to review the
project location, adjusted property lines, proposed project pump station and feFeesl force
main vault, site development review, the California Environmental Quality Act (CEQA) review,
and conditions of approval."
Page 83, Item 13, paragraph 5: "Michael Gelfand, representing the ownership of the Bayside
Village Marina f8YM and Back Bay Landing project, noted alternative locations, noted the
proposed plan deeFeeses cuts their project in half due to easements, utilized a slide to
highlight the truck traffic, and asked that Council exercise good planning." [The abbreviation
"BVM," otherwise without explanation, is used in paragraph 3 from the end of the page. As to
the second suggestion, see the video. "Cuts" (as in "divides") is the word used by the
speaker. Substituting "decreases" for it makes sense neither substantively nor grammatically.]
Page 87, paragraph 8: "Jessie Fleming noted a 120% increase in meefing fe the dinghy
impound feetook issue with the impact of impounding dinghies, asked for everyone to work
together, and for Council to reconsider the impound fee." [See video.]
Page 87, paragraph 3 from end: "In response to Mayor Pro Tem Stapleton's question,
Harbormaster Blank relayed that the lift abuser has fesefved .. honored all his
reservations so far this calendar year." [The complete response was that this calendar year
the person had made three reservations and honored them all.]
Item 4. Resolution No. 2024-31: Amending City Council Policies A-1,
A-2, D-1 and D-5, to Help the Public Discern Whether a
Communication is an Official or Personal Communication
This seems like it should be a discussion item, because policies presented in the Council's
name should be the Council's creation and not simply whatever City staff thinks is best for it,
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and because the required changes are not entirely obvious and since it is unclear how the new
responsibilities will be communicated to the officials and employees affected by them, including
the many appointed board, commission and committee citizen volunteers.'
I have not had time to fully read the Lindke v. Freed 601 U.S. (2024) Supreme Court opinion
referenced in the staff report, but I notice the recommended disclaimer to identify personal
communications, found on page 13 of the opinion and repeated twice on page 4-2 of the staff
report, is to say "the views expressed are strictly my own." So, it is curious there is no
explanation why our City Attorney's office recommends omitting the word "strictly' when
amending the Council's policies (staff report pages 4-21, 4-33, 4-40 and 4-48).
Regarding the proposed changes, looking at the redlines of Attachment B...
Page 4-64, under "Use of City Stationery and Email": In the second sentence, the superfluous
"and email' should be deleted. It is already encompassed in "correspondence." As to the third
sentence, how far does the prohibition of use of City email for "personal matters" go. Can one
not even use it to wish a colleague a speedy recovery from an illness?
Page 4-64, under "Private Digital Communications": The second sentence should be reduced
to "Such communications shall make it clear that the Council Member is not speaking on behalf
of the City (i.e., "views expressed are my own')" [and, again, shouldn't that be "strictly my
own?"). The proposed long preamble ("Digital communications by a Council Member through a
Digital Communication Platform owned or controlled by the Council Member or a third -party that
discusses City matters") simply restates, and possibly misstates, the kinds of "communications"
defined in the preceding sentence. If no difference is intended, why is that being restated?
Page 4-76, under "Expression of Official City Position or Policy" for Board, Commission and
Committee members: Are individual members really supposed to submit their requests for
official City positions directly to the City Council? Or should they ask their respective body (as a
whole) to make the request? Also how does this apply to the Board of Library Trustees, which
the City Charter empowers to make library policy. Aren't those official City policies?
Page 4-76, under "Private Digital Communications": See comment on page 4-54, above. The
second sentence, again, unwisely repeats a long phrase from the first with slightly different
words where it is unlikely any difference in meaning was intended. Assuming no difference was
intended, the phrase should be replaced by "Such communications."
Page 4-77, under "Use of City Stationery and Email": See comment on page 5-54. In the
second sentence, the two occurrences of "or email" should be deleted.
Page 4-80, under "Purpose": This policy (D-1) will say it applies to "all City employees,
consultants, staff, and members of boards, commissions, and committees." Does it not apply to
City Council members? Or are they regarded as employees?
' I don't know what, if any, orientation board and commission appointees receive, but as one of the
Council's 30 appointees on the City's General Plan Advisory Committee, I am quite sure no one has told
me about the existence of Council Policy A-2, let alone that I should read it and be looking for revisions.
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Page 4-80, under "A.1. Designated Spokespersons": Who designates the "designated
departmental representatives"? Shouldn't that be defined somewhere, such as with "Every
Department Director shall [or "may' ?] designate a media representative for their department'?
Also, why are the City Manager and City Attorney listed, but not the City Clerk, who, as election
officer and in other roles, may receive inquiries from the press?
Pages 4-84 and 4-86: The proposed Policy D-1 ends with a notation about an "[Attachment
Exhibit A]" which is likely the form reproduced on page 4-86. However, the body of the policy
does not reference any exhibits or attachments. Was this supposed to be cited under "2.
Format" on page 4-81 ?
Page 4-87: In paragraph 1 under "Purpose," is the deletion of "websites, ..., wikis, blogs, and
mobile content' from the scope of this policy intentional? I am not sure what "mobile content"
refers to, but personal websites and blogs would be means of digital communication that would
not seem to be "social media platforms." It seems strange to limiting the scope to Digital
Communication Platforms, as defined, and email.
Page 4-87: In paragraph 2 under "Purpose," is it really the intention to delete "officials" and
make this policy applicable only to employees and consultants? Rather than restating
regulations in Policies A-1 and A-2, wouldn't it be more efficient to simply make those persons
subject to this as a general digital communications policy?
Page 4-87: In paragraph 3 under "Purpose," shouldn't the first sentence say "Digital
Communication Platforms and email," like the second?
Also if the intent is to cover "Digital Communication Platforms and email," should that be the
definition of "Digital Communications" so a separate definition of "Platforms" isn't necessary?
Page 4-87: In the first paragraph of "A. Content" under "City Websites," why is "general" to be
deleted from "the local community and the general public." Isn't the "local community" part of
the "public"? How about: ""the local community and the public at large"?
Item 9. License Agreement with Aqua Superpower (USA), Inc. for
Installation and Operation of an Electric Watercraft Charging Station
at Marina Park Located at 1600 West Balboa Boulevard
I could be dreaming, but I thought there was report from the Harbormaster at a recent Harbor
Commission meeting about this being tied to the anticipated acquisition of an
electrically -powered patrol vessel and the need to have a means of charging it overnight, and
some connection between the vendors, but I see nothing about that in the present
recommendation.
Beyond that, I do not see how the Council can make the findings suggested in
Recommendation "c)."
Why would conducting an open bid process result in excess vacancy and deprive the public of a
beneficial service? On the contrary, wouldn't it potentially provide that service at a lower cost?
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Item 11. Balboa Branch Library / Fire Station No. 1 Concept Review
and Approval - Project No. 23F12
The lack of effective public input regarding the library design is very troubling to me, particularly
compared to my memories of the extensive outreach and revision of designs that accompanied
the similar exercise conducted for development of the combination library and fire station in
Corona del Mar (or for that matter, the more recent Lecture Hall, for which a special committee
was created and reviewed architects and designs for more than a year).
We learn now, for the first time, on page 11-2, that the goals and design of this facility have been
guided by "a three Councilmember working group (consisting of Mayor Pro Tern Stapleton,
Councilmember Blom and Councilmember Weigand)."
How many of these Council "working groups" has the Public Works department created, and
under what authority? I am pretty sure the public was unaware of this one's activities. Even the
City Clerk, in her list of Boards, Commissions and Committees (including Council Ad Hoc
committees), seems unaware of its existence.
As to public involvement, the plans were publicly reviewed and available for comment at exactly
one meeting of the Board of Library Trustees. At that meeting on January 16 (as may not be
entirely evident from the minutes), no one, including the Trustees, had seen the plans until they
were unveiled at the meeting itself. Expecting reasoned comments within minutes of first seeing
a thing hardly seems an effective way to solicit input.
The Board was told they had two floor plans to choose between, but as best I can tell, there is a
single floor plan being offered by the architect, simply mirror -reversed and rotated to create
"Option 2" out of "Option 1." Who suggested it, or why, is unknown to me. The public has also
seen no renderings of what the interior would look like. This compares to the CdM Branch,
where, if I remember correctly, after much back and forth with the architect, especially as to how
the childrens storytime area and adult reading porch would be Iayed out, the Board settled on
somethng like "Floor Plan D."
As reflected in the minutes of the only other public discussion of the plans, that at the March 5,
2024, PB&R meeting, one of the main themes picked up on by the commissioners was the
indadequacy of the public outreach. Instead of recommending a "preferred Concept Plan Option
and Building Elevation Option" as they had been asked to do, they decided to recommend the
City "Continue to refine the Branch Library and Fire Station Site Concept Plans, Building
Elevations and accompanying recreational components and layout."
Now, despite repeated public suggestions that interior library space was more valuable than
exterior space, and that the initially proposed Public Works storage area could be used for that,
and the absence of any option yet recommended by PB&R, the Council has before it a third
option, never seen or reviewed by the Board of Library Trustees, in which the storage space is
used primarily to expand the Fire Station and its parking lot.
This does not seem like a good process.